1.21.2010

Submarine Adventure



Submarine Adventure
ROderick Hunt
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-The professer pushed the light switch.
"Bother! The light don't work," he said.
Biff looked out of the window.
"Oh no! Help! Professor Tangle! I can see huge rocks," see called.

The story is about a magic key, and go to adventure. A girl gave a present, a small submarine. After that, they went to adventure world. They met a old man, Tangle. He want to find diamonds. and they went into the sea with Tangle. Of course, the vehicle is thier submarine. They felt happy and said what a fantastic! but suddenly the submarine didn't handle. and they could see lots of rocks. They were in trouble. but Tangle could move a submarine. They have a narrow escape.After that, children decided to go back their home.

Mr. Tangle is pretty funny! He couldn't hear well what they said. He is funny person. I like him.
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