The Blue Cat Club
wrote: Bernard Smith
YL= 0.8
Number of words= 900
Merlin has only one sword now.
There is only one hole in the door.
Merlin smiles again at the people in front of him, and pushes the sword in quickly.
'Aaaaaagh!'
The story, two men deceive each other. A couple, James and Chantal, go to the blue ct club. A magician is friendly person but James don't like him. A magician know that so he perform a magic trick, prick with a sward to a box being a person. He designate James. It is just a magic but James is not moving. His eyes closed. His shirt under his hands is red.
I like the story. The resolt, James didn't die. He just deceive a magician. He drank a tomato juice... do you understand? I think James is clever like a magician.
wrote: Bernard Smith
YL= 0.8
Number of words= 900
Merlin has only one sword now.
There is only one hole in the door.
Merlin smiles again at the people in front of him, and pushes the sword in quickly.
'Aaaaaagh!'
The story, two men deceive each other. A couple, James and Chantal, go to the blue ct club. A magician is friendly person but James don't like him. A magician know that so he perform a magic trick, prick with a sward to a box being a person. He designate James. It is just a magic but James is not moving. His eyes closed. His shirt under his hands is red.
I like the story. The resolt, James didn't die. He just deceive a magician. He drank a tomato juice... do you understand? I think James is clever like a magician.
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1 件のコメント:
Yes, this story is very simple, but interesting.
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